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You Make My Eyes Hurt
Eden Betrayal
You went to sleep,
And didn't wake up.
It left my heart hurting,
A colossal botch up.
Months have flown by,
Since you went to sleep.
Days and days I weep,
I found that I'm not so tough.
My eyes, they keep hurting,
Enough is enough.
My life has flown by,
As I continually weep.
Eden Betrayal has published since joining on 30/11/99. Read more of Eden's terrible poetry at the anthology. Here are three of Eden's latest works: