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Poem 655

Very Bad Archive

When She Smiles

Robert Hawkins

That I remember your caress.
Looking into your eyes.
A man lose his substance become a prisoner.
Flooding memories lingering heat.
The man inside me living fire.
My lady of sweet body sultry eyes.
Your touch,,tremors, your voice I tingle, Queen Cobra.
Mesemerized a tiny turn left side her mouth.
Barest of muscle inflection.
She is going to smile!
Her most precious of gifts.
Making me whole again.
You try to stop yourself, but for that vision.
When She Smiled.
I have a big dumb grin.
bobby.

Note;
likely for the rejection bin.
1 out of 20 ain't good odds.
some supposed infraction?
Anyone got a clue?
bobby

Robert Hawkins has published 2 more terrible poems since joining on 30/11/99. Read more of Robert's terrible poetry at the anthology. Here are three of Robert's latest works:

A Day, of Bobby as interpeted, Emily Reeve

Submitted Aug 2nd, 22:52

Trilogy by Emily Reeve #3

Submitted Jul 27th, 21:49

Trilogy by Emily Reeve #2

Submitted Jul 27th, 21:35