Very Bad Poetry

Welcome to the last refuge for the world's worst poetry.

It's difficult to understand how, in this age of information, poems that merely miss the mark can be tossed into the cold world to fend for themselves, only to whither and be forgotten.

Please help us to help them to help us.




Just released: Bad Poet

A very bad app for Mac OS X. Read more here.

Poem 2855

Very Bad Archive

Sadness

Maxine Venturelli

My tears are like the raging rapids spewing out of my eyes.
I can see a reflection of your face in the water droplets so blue.
My stomach feels like a gravedigger is digging a deeper grave for my broken heart.
I feel choked by an unknown spirit.
My body quivers like a twitching finger.
I can't see, the world goes black.

Maxine Venturelli has published since joining on 30/11/99. Read more of Maxine's terrible poetry at the anthology. Here are three of Maxine's latest works:

Sadness

Submitted Oct 5th 2010, 07:52