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Distant Thunder

luis lightning

Distant Thunder


I feel it rolling, coming around


Like an omen of future situations to come


I succumb to the powers and the beings above


I get shoved turned and twisted. Is it ever enough?


Do I control the rains? Or is just a Facade?


Can I manage the pain? Am I a victim to God?


Am I to forecast the weather or narrate the story?


Believe in forever? Or search for the glory?


Day by day? Or year by year?


Tear by tear, dripping down my face in despair


With the fear...of what awaits me here and now


Be myself? What is me? What am I?


Whenever I try to become someone, it's a lie.


Lightning's born, but cannot confrom to the sky


So it is thrown to the ground and expected to die


Not expected to climb, or to surge to the top


While the light may burn out the electrons don't stop


Like the thoughts ever-bouncing off the walls in my head


Like the uncertainty between my birth and my death.


Till my last breath

luis lightning has published since joining on 30/11/99. Read more of luis's terrible poetry at the anthology. Here are three of luis's latest works:

Distant Thunder

Submitted Oct 1st 2008, 13:28